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Escape

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Tottering,

stumbling in the darkness.

Throbbing,

a cranium swells like a balloon;

Monstrous thoughts scratching

and scouring for an escape.

SMACK!

A tender cheek lands on a cool surface.


Groaning,

the heavy load is unzipped,

right between the two pastures of hair.

Oozing,

inky black drippings spill out,

staining a virgin blanket of papery snow.


Moving

to an unheard rhythm,

the inklings lace

together on a grid of blue.

Radiating,

raw emotions

all jumbled and obscure.


Pounding,

a heart accelerates in a bony cave.

Dredging,

finding and ensnaring wounds like criminals.

Surfacing,

tearing them  away from their shaded sanctuary;

sadness their only ally.

Brought forth and smeared

on the paper in a heap of red.


Awakening

from a dismal abyss,

an anguished soul once drenched in

loneliness and misery

has been purged;

exiled from its  fleshy cave.

Shining,

somewhat abashed,

for all the world to see.



 


 


 


 



Hey! It's me dabbling in poetry again
What do you guys think? Feedback and constructive criticisms are most appreciated!

I really would love to here people's interpretations of this meager little poem. It'd make me extremely happy!

Have a pleasant day!
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