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Literature Text
Tottering,
stumbling in the darkness.
Throbbing,
a cranium swells like a balloon;
Monstrous thoughts scratching
and scouring for an escape.
SMACK!
A tender cheek lands on a cool surface.
Groaning,
the heavy load is unzipped,
right between the two pastures of hair.
Oozing,
inky black drippings spill out,
staining a virgin blanket of papery snow.
Moving
to an unheard rhythm,
the inklings lace
together on a grid of blue.
Radiating,
raw emotions
all jumbled and obscure.
Pounding,
a heart accelerates in a bony cave.
Dredging,
finding and ensnaring wounds like criminals.
Surfacing,
tearing them away from their shaded sanctuary;
sadness their only ally.
Brought forth and smeared
on the paper in a heap of red.
Awakening
from a dismal abyss,
an anguished soul once drenched in
loneliness and misery
has been purged;
exiled from its fleshy cave.
Shining,
somewhat abashed,
for all the world to see.
What do you guys think? Feedback and constructive criticisms are most appreciated!
I really would love to here people's interpretations of this meager little poem. It'd make me extremely happy!
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